My second submission for Acrostic Taang Week: A is for Astrology. Since I don't know of any acknowledged zodiac or star formations in the Avatar world, I went for more of a totem/symbolic theme (If you can figure all the figures on the stones and their meanings out, cookies and kudos for you! *wink* ).
[Hint: the Koh-Toph-swamp theory. That ol' chestnut's hard to crack. ]
------- Now that she's back in the atmosphere With drops of Jupiter in her hair, hey, hey She acts like summer and walks like rain Reminds me that there's time to change, hey, hey Since the return from her stay on the moon She listens like spring and she talks like June, hey, hey
Tell me, did you sail across the sun Did you make it to the Milky Way to see the lights all faded And that heaven is overrated
Tell me, did you fall for a shooting star One without a permanent scar And did you miss me while you were looking at yourself out there
Now that she's back from that soul vacation Tracing her way through the constellation, hey, hey She checks out Mozart while she does tae-bo Reminds me that there's room to grow, hey, hey
Now that she's back in the atmosphere I'm afraid that she might think of me as plain ol' Jane Told a story about a man who is too afraid to fly so he never did land
Tell me, did the wind sweep you off your feet Did you finally get the chance to dance along the light of day And head back to the Milky Way And tell me, did Venus blow your mind Was it everything you wanted to find And did you miss me while you were looking for yourself out there
Can you imagine no love, pride, deep-fried chicken Your best friend always sticking up for you, even when I know you're wrong Can you imagine no first dance, freeze-dried romance five-hour phone conversation The best soy latte that you ever had . . . and me
Tell me, did the wind sweep you off your feet Did you finally get the chance to dance along the light of day And head back toward the Milky Way
Tell me, did you sail across the sun Did you make it to the Milky Way to see the lights all faded And that heaven is overrated
Tell me, did you fall for a shooting star One without a permanent scar And did you miss me while you were looking for yourself... ...were you lonely while you were looking for yourself out there?
~Train, "Drops of Jupiter"
Characters belong to Mike and Bryan and Nickelodeon.
HOLY FLYING HOGMONKEYS. I LOVE the symbolism in this. 8'DDDD The poses are perfect and I adore Aang's kind of apprehensive look. The koifish are really cute, too. THIS DESERVES COLOR.
Only critique... Toph seems bigger than Aang. Taller or something.
-- "Saying that hockey is popular in Canada would be pointless. That statement would be right up there with saying water is wet, the sun is hot and beavers are awesome." - HowtospotaCanadian
Yep, that was my horrible attempt at trying to make Aang a degree behind/to the side of the big rock, but ultimately FAIL. ><;; I would change it, except I'm not sure if I would be able to duplicate the expressions. Thanks very much for the critique!
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If the right hand is controlled by the left side of the brain, then only left-handed people are in their right mind.
It's not a fail! It's perfect, just out of scale with Toph. That's all. Stop beating yourself up about it. No problem, love.
-- "Saying that hockey is popular in Canada would be pointless. That statement would be right up there with saying water is wet, the sun is hot and beavers are awesome." - HowtospotaCanadian
I love Toph with her hair loose! You always draw both of them so well! Oh, and a question: I get the Koh-thing (with the tree & Koh underneath it, right?), but I don't get that comet (or is it a fireball?)
-- It's easy to do nothing, but it's hard to forgive. ~ Aang -- Nobody changes. If someone isn't acting the same as yesterday, you just didn't know him. ~ Me
Yep, it's a comet... Sozin's. ^^ I thought of it as a spacey, astrological body; plus in the Avatar world it was the harbringer of doom. Doubly, it could represent the element of fire-- just as Tui and La represent balance as well as the element of water, and the One Tree represents the all-in-one and the mystical aspect, as well as that creepy tree Koh lives under. Koh represents death and entropy, etc. I could go on and on, but basically... it's open to interpretation. Thanks for commenting!
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If the right hand is controlled by the left side of the brain, then only left-handed people are in their right mind.
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"Excuse me, coach? Why isn't my son the pitcher?"
"'Cause it\'s T-ball."
my OTP
"I am Aunt Wu in the Unofficial Avatar Crew!"
Virgo and Libra is actually pretty appropriate for them, now I think about it...
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If the right hand is controlled by the left side of the brain, then only left-handed people are in their right mind.
"Jellyfishies... <3" ~Cookie, from Saturnalia
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"Excuse me, coach? Why isn't my son the pitcher?"
"'Cause it\'s T-ball."
my OTP
"I am Aunt Wu in the Unofficial Avatar Crew!"
Only critique... Toph seems bigger than Aang. Taller or something.
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"Saying that hockey is popular in Canada would be pointless. That statement would be right up there with saying water is wet, the sun is hot and beavers are awesome."
- HowtospotaCanadian
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If the right hand is controlled by the left side of the brain, then only left-handed people are in their right mind.
"Jellyfishies... <3" ~Cookie, from Saturnalia
No problem, love.
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"Saying that hockey is popular in Canada would be pointless. That statement would be right up there with saying water is wet, the sun is hot and beavers are awesome."
- HowtospotaCanadian
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It's easy to do nothing, but it's hard to forgive. ~ Aang
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Nobody changes.
If someone isn't acting the same as yesterday,
you just didn't know him. ~ Me
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If the right hand is controlled by the left side of the brain, then only left-handed people are in their right mind.
"Jellyfishies... <3" ~Cookie, from Saturnalia
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~ Flames to dust, lovers to friends
Why do all good things come to an end ~
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